Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up. Do the benefits of this outweigh the drawbacks?

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Many graduates opt to attend colleges and universities which are far from their locality.

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students studying in distant colleges get exposure and become independent, I believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages because they might misuse their freedom and get attracted to bad habits. The main advantage of studying in other cities is that they will become capable of handling daily activities without any help.

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to say that, when staying with family we share daily chores which is not an individual responsibility.

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to that, with lesser family distractions they get plenty of time to concentrate on their academics for a better future.

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, a recent study in India has revealed that students who joined distant colleges have not only excelled in exams but

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demonstrated extraordinary skills in campus festivals and hiring events.

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, I believe that some will be not able to handle

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drastic change in life and become unsuccessful in directing towards a better path. The disadvantage is that young minds get an opportunity to enjoy freedom

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weak minded will be involved in bad company.

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a lack of monitoring by guardians might attract them towards unlawful activities and tend to misuse the given independence.

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, a survey in metropolitan cities has revealed that most of the residential college students are drug addicts , indulged in various fights and were later caught by police. In conclusion, even though individuals become mature enough to handle their life on their own and build their future ahead by joining non-local universities it

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has drawbacks of being drawn into the wrong company and will not be able to direct the freedom given to right path.

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cultural sensitivity
personal growth
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Coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in Australia

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, prefer to take risks and think that change is a positive thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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