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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates the different proportions of the 4 kinds of
fuel
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 that 5 countries in Asia use in 2005.
Overall
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, coal and lignite are the primary sources of
fuel
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 in Malaysia and Singapore
while
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 nuclear is the most dependable one in Japan. Thailand and South Korea heavily rely on petrol products and hydro and wind respectively.
According to
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 the table, the amount of coal and lignite consumed in Malaysia is higher than that of any other country. Indeed, they account for 61%, followed by nuclear with 19%, the second most important
fuel
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.
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, 42% of the
fuel
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 that Singapore uses is coal and lignite, the
most
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primary source of
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.
In contrast
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, it is interesting to note that the other 3 nations account for the highest percentage of different sources of power. Petrol products are the most common energy in Thailand, which shows no reliance on nuclear.
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, nearly half of the power comes from hydro and wind in South Korea
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 nuclear
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 plays a significant role. Japan has a dominant use of nuclear with 49% in spite of other types of
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 remaining unimportant.

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