Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

Whenever people are asked, health is always among the top concerns of everyone around the world. Despite the ubiquity of

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in both big cities and rural areas, people still find themselves less healthy than ever before. In

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essay, I will explain some of the leading causes of

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phenomenon and what we can do about it. As many

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, the first reason for the decline in personal health is the modern lifestyle. With the

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in

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jobs, more and more people spend their day inactive and stuck behind office desks.

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, cities are usually designed for driving and many find it difficult to bike or walk. To make the matter worst is the fact that sidewalks in urban

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are being occupied by vendors to sell

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, newspapers, or toys. Even if somehow we find a green space near where we live, we probably still choose to stay

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and distract ourselves using social media because of

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convenience. So, how can we break

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habit of

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world? By joining

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clubs in the

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or establishing one with friends, we create a reason to stay active.

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, we could

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time with loved ones walking and talking about our day after dinner.

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we think

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problem could only be solved by individual actions, government policies may

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a big role in promoting more activities by

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communities with easier access to public

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, more bike lanes and walk-only streets. In the end, our health

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always been affected by our environments but we

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can change our surrounding to fits

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our needs. I believe it is possible to resolve

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problem with collective actions from both the government and individuals.