The diagram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mae comparisons with relevant.
The diagram illustrates how to produce canned fruit step by step.
It is clear that
there are several main steps in the process
, from the picking of pears
to the final canned product.
Overall
, it can be seen that process
of canning pears
is a complex process
involving many steps
In the first stage of the process
, ripe pears
are picked by hand and then
transported to the factory where the pears
are washed and then
checked for quality under a magnified view. Next,
the defective pears
are taken away and the good ones are cooled in storage at a specific temperature. Then
the pears
are weighed and graded into different grades. Following
this
, the pears
are peeled before being sliced, and then
their cores are removed. In the next step, these cored and sliced pears
are put in cans and sealed before being cooked. This
sterilized the cans filled with pears
. After
this
, the cans are labelled and stored and are finally
delivered to the supermarkets for sale.Submitted by mintu258 on
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