Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagreee. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Whenever applying for a job, personal information becomes one of the
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needs in the resume for the
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's use.
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, there are some applicants does not think personal
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are essential for the
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. There are actually two different opinions regarding the over expose
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to employers one hand agree it is useful and the other hand thinks the opposite. It is useful as employers can consider the applicants' situation. At the same time, it can be useless because usually employers just think about
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performance rather than their employees' benefits. On the positive side, giving out personal
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can be helpful for the
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to consider the applicants' job scope and work schedule. Since married people need to balance work and home responsibilities.
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, an
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of a particular
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reconsiders married men or women from working overtime as they
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need to focus on their married life and their children.
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would help them from being over-whelmed and save more marriage life. Contrastly, the individual's hobbies, status and interest can be useless as the
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does not really interested in them and just focus on their
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and experiences since those can really help with the
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's development.
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, Petronas, one of the big companies' priorities skilful and experienced which can be a force for the
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to improve.
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,
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actually makes only those people with their wanted
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will be employed. To summarise, self-interest and hobbies can be useless or useful depending on how the
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analyses the application. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement since most the
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even the influence
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more focus on
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rather than our interests.
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, the
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should emphasise the
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that they want in their employees.
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