Should parents be obliged to immunise their children against childhood diseases? Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

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Some people argue that the state does not have the right to make parents
immunise
their
children
.
However
, I feel the question is not whether they should
immunise
but whether, as members of
society
, they have the right not to. Preventative medicine has proved to be the most effective way of reducing the incidence of fatal childhood
diseases
.
As a result
of the widespread practice of immunising young
children
in our
society
, many lives have been saved and
the
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diseases
have been reduced to almost zero. In previous centuries
children
died from ordinary illnesses
such
as influenza and tuberculosis and because few people had immunity, the
diseases
spread easily.
Diseases
such
as dysentery were the result of poor hygiene but these have long been eradicated since the arrival of good sanitation and clean water. Nobody would suggest that we should reverse
this
good practice now because dysentery has been wiped out. Serious
diseases
such
as polio and smallpox have
also
been eradicated through national immunisation programmes. In consequence,
children
not immunised are far less at risk in
this
disease-free
society
than they would
otherwise
be. Parents choosing not to
immunise
are relying on the fact that the
diseases
have already been eradicated. If the number of parents choosing not to
immunise
increased, there would be a similar increase in the risk of the
diseases
returning. Immunisation is not an issue like seatbelts which affects only the individual. A decision not to
immunise
will have widespread repercussions for the whole of
society
and
for
this
reason, I do not believe that individuals have the right to stand aside. In my
opinion
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immunisation should be obligatory.
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