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The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of larger fish called the salmon. Summariase the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of larger fish called the salmon. Summariase the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram
illusrates
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illustrates
 the life cycle of
salmon
, from their birth to return back where they were born.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
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salmon
 grows in 3 different sizes in their whole life.
In particular
, they both can swim in
river
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rivers
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 and sea.
Moreover
,
salmon
 species come back
where
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to where
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 their life began for reproducing
purpose
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purposes
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. First of all, the adult
salmon
 lay eggs
in
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at
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 the bottom of
upper
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the upper
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river
, between reeds and small stones. From hatching to growing up to
‘fry’
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the ‘fry’
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 stage, which
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aproximately
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approximately
 3 to 8
centimeters
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centimetres
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 long, it normally takes 5-6 months. They begin moving to
lower
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the lower
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 part of the
river
, where much faster water flows than
their
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in their
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 home. Fries spend about 4 years
to get
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getting
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 bigger to
‘smolt’
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the ‘smolt’
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 stage. In
this
 stage, they become 12-15
centimeters
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centimetres
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 long.
Next,
smolts keep swimming
to
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into
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 the open sea, and it takes normally 5 years to get there. At the ocean, they
finally
 grow up as
the
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adult salmons. They are fully grown, and their size is nearly 70-76
centimeters
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centimetres
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 long. The adult salmons
going
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go
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 back to their home when the
mate
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mating
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 season comes. After they arrive, they lay eggs all the way up to
upper
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the upper
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 parts of the
river
 again.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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