The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about that place what suggestions you would like to make Why are you offering these suggestions?

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Dear Sir My name is Peter. I'm a co-worker at our company. I heard about the company is planning to kick-off a new

program

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on TV which

located

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in Rark River. It's so impressive. I'm delighted if you consider NewRK Central, it's a place

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apply

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suitable for

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technology companies.

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week ago, I heard about

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newsletter. It's a new place and attractive

people

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who love the forest. We can move to

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to start a new program. It has a beautiful view and is close to natural resources.

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, my company to release nutrition products and it will

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attract people. I would like to suggest you organize the new program.

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, we need to hire KOL to promote new products.

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, we need to set up

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the Lake. There are many birds associated with horses. It seems people , nature , and signs entwine here. I was hoping and looking forward to hearing from you, If you have any questions, please feel free to reach out to me. Thanks and regards Vy

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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