The news company is going to start a new program on TV about a particular place. Write a letter to offer your suggestions on what the program should be like. In your letter, you should tell: how you know about that place what suggestions you would like to make Why are you offering these suggestions?

Dear Sir My name is Peter. I'm a co-worker at our company. I heard about the company is planning to kick-off a new
program
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on TV which
located
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in Rark River. It's so impressive. I'm delighted if you consider NewRK Central, it's a place
to
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suitable for
the
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technology companies.
Last
week ago, I heard about
this
newsletter. It's a new place and attractive
people
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to people
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who love the forest. We can move to
this
to start a new program. It has a beautiful view and is close to natural resources.
Moreover
, my company to release nutrition products and it will
also
attract people. I would like to suggest you organize the new program.
Firstly
, we need to hire KOL to promote new products.
Secondly
, we need to set up
this
along with
the Lake. There are many birds associated with horses. It seems people , nature , and signs entwine here. I was hoping and looking forward to hearing from you, If you have any questions, please feel free to reach out to me. Thanks and regards Vy
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