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Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Every century has its own life-changing inventions.
People
 argue that
computers
 are the most important invention of the
last
 hundred years. I personally agree with
this
 statement. In my view,
computers
 are the most powerful and contributing innovations of the 21st century. The effect of
computers
 on our society, economy, science, and other parts of life cannot be overrated. First
computers
 were created as science tools,
hence
, they had and have a huge impact on the science field. With the help of
computers
, scientists could solve many different problems that could not be done with the power of human beings.
Computers
 help scientists to make complicated calculations in fields like physics, biology, chemistry, etc.
Moreover
, nowadays
computers
 take the word of machine learning and develop new artificial intelligence
that is
 already bringing huge changes to the job market, education process, advertisement, and art.
Then
 in the 90s
computers
 had radical changes in the economy and business. With the help of the internet, which works with
computers
,
people
 had big opportunities in the business field.
For example
, one of the biggest companies in the world Amazon started to sell books online. The Internet has allowed
people
 to buy products with one click sitting at home.
Consequently
,
computers
 have changed the way mankind lives. Now
people
 can do almost everything on the Internet: buy a ticket to the move, order food, find a partner, and study some field. So,
computers
 have started to change society. More
people
 now choose to stay home with their phones rather than go outside. Children waste millions of hours with
computers
. I personally, knew that scrolling Instagram does not make me happy and negatively affects my brain. In conclusion, I believe that there is no doubt that
computers
 are the most important innovations of the
last
 century. Computres' impact on the world is already huge, but it will rise with every day.
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