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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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This
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 table illustrates the proportion usage of several types of
fuel
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 to produce electricity in Malaysia, Singapore,
Thailand
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, South Korea and Japan in 2005. Japan has the highest use
in
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 the nuclear
fuel
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 type (49 % of total
fuel
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). South Korea Comes
at
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the
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second place by using 33 %
Follewed
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Followed
 by Malaysia and Singapore
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 indicate utilizing 19% and 13 %. For
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Thailand
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,Thailand
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 the percentage is zero. When it comes to Coal and Lignite Malaysia got the most proportion used in
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fuel
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 type (at 61 %),
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Singapore it is 42%. The major source of production of electricity in
Thailand
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 was using Petroleum Products, but almost the same percentage for the other countries.
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,
Hydo
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Hydro
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 used the most in South Korea 48%,
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for
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Thailand
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 it is 19%. Taking
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everything
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in
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 consideration that
Thailand
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 utilized
other
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another fuel type
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fuel
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 type widely than the
menioned
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mentioned
 ones in the table.
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, the table indicates the least and the most used
fuel
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 types
is
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in
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 some countries.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel, thailand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "indicate" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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