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In today’s very competitive world, a worker has to possess multiple skills to succeed. Among the skills that a worker should possess, which skill do you think is more important, social skills or good qualifications? Explain the reasons and provide specific examples to support your answer.

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In current days, people need to have multiple abilities for success in their workplace.
Consequently
, it helps to be valuable in the profession in which you are working at the moment.
Although
 there are requirements for specialized abilities
such
 as social mastery and qualification respectively.
However
, I opine that only good qualifications will be valuable in
this
 world.
To begin
 with, nowadays most workers ought to attend good qualifications in crucial spheres like machines technology or cyber security.
For example
, some statistics show that a lot of people can not get workplaces in companies with high salaries, because the world always changes in that case, workers need specialized competence to adapt and to be useful,
that is
 why there is importance in improving masteries to survive. it is often argued that a community with social skills will be replaced by robots completely in the future,
For instance
,
it is clear that
 robots cannot easily discuss with people even though the development of artificial intelligence already tries to do that. If it goes,
then
 there will be no need for psychology or cashier, and now it would be a matter of time before society will rely on them. Taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that there is big significance in good qualifications and there is no doubt that social skills will be less needed in near future.
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