Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and works goals more easily than before. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that

internet

usage plays a vital role in assisting youngsters and employees. With their academic and work achievement. I personally disagree

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idea for several reasons. On the hand, the

internet

contains lots of information and

easily

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accessible.

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,

this

is

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assisting people in advancing their comprehension of more essential skills and improving result

academic

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from numerous website

platform

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. If

students

find it challenging to understand any

areas

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of knowledge, they can search on

the

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social media or various

website

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websites

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to find the answer.

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, IELTS

students

revise

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for their upcoming test, have more likely to search for sample writings on

website

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online to enhance their writing skills.

Therefore

, they will

easy

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achieve higher band scores thank

to

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learning resource on the

internet

.

Moreover

, people currently do not need to meet face-to-face because they can present their ideas and discuss works via apps

such

as Zoom or Microsoft

Team

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. Workers may stay at home and submit tasks to their superiors.

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productivity has a tendency to accelerate thanks to

Internet

access.

On the other hand

, it

also

has limitations like harming

students

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and

labourers

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lives.

First,

information on many online platforms is likely untruthful, fake, or toxic. If

students

do not have careful choices, tend to be contaminated.

Moreover

, we can see that

share

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use

Internet

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to promote career paths are much lesser than for entertainment purpose. In conclusion, despite the advantages of the main goal of

Internet

access. I contend

this

idea

have

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significant effects on

people

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demand.