The graph shows the percentage of UK adolescents following a vegetarian diet. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph indicates the proportion of teenagers following a vegetarian diet
in England in a period of time between 1960 and 2020.
To start with the time between 1960 and 1980 which is 20 years
difference there was a massive increase in the percentage to almost 16% adolescents
were on a vegetarian Change preposition
of adolescents
diet
plan. Then
, after 10 years
at
Change preposition
in
1990
the use of Add a comma
,1990
this
diet
got decreased to 7%. However
, it kept falling down till 1997 were
it reached 4% and it was the lowest point between these Change the verb form
was
years
. Otherwise
, from
2000 and 2010 the number jumped to 11% in ten Change preposition
between
years
. Also
, the time between 2010 and 2020 the number was kind of stable this
means that the number did not change from 11%.
In conclusion, the year Correct pronoun usage
which
where
teenagers were following the vegetarian Correct word choice
when
diet
the most was at
1980, Change preposition
apply
while
in
1997 it was the Change preposition
apply
least
year for these teens to attend the vegetarian Correct your spelling
last
diet
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