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The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The given table compares five Asian regions in terms of the proportion of energy generation by using five different types of sources in 2005.
Overall
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Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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 used coal and lignite as the main fuels to produce power,
whereas
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 South
Korea
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 used hydro and wind farms.
Moreover
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,
Japan
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 received the most amount of energy from nuclear stations.
In contrast
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, petroleum products were the least share in all the regions, except
Thailand
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 where other sources were the most common way to generate electricity. Looking at the details, nuclear stations in
Japan
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 produced a hefty 49% of the all power in the country, whilst South
Korea
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 by 16% less and
Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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 by around 30% less, compared to
Thailand
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 which didn’t generate energy from
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 source at all. As for coal and lignite,
Malaysia
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 and
Singapore
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 had the leading positions with 61% and 42% respectively,
while
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 other countries amounted to an average of 4,5%. Other sources are used in
Singapore
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,
Thailand
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 and
Japan
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 with approximately 40%
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 the rest countries generated less than 15% of all electricity. Meanwhile, Petroleum products accounted for the smallest segment of power generation in
Malaysia
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Singapore
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, South
Korea
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 and
Japan
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 with about 3%,
whereas
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Thailand
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 made 36%.
In addition
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, hydro and wind stations supplied South
Korea
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 with 48% of its capacity,
while
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Thailand
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 produced 19% and other countries amounted to an average of 4%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words malaysia, singapore, korea, japan, thailand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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