Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a view that the same statistic of
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should study at universities in each faculty. I partially agree with
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proposal since I see a couple of favourable aspects of
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approach.
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, knowing that both genders have different interests and capabilities, it is impossible to have the same
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of them in different
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. Having the same
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of male and female students is a must in terms of providing opportunities to achieve gender equality in the workplace.
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, there are some
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such
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as BA (Business Administration) and Management which consist of
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who
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trained to be top-level managers and even a CEO. That means that most of the managerial positions will be occupied by men.
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, it would be hard to see
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as managers and it would be improbable to acquire equity among both genders. As men and women have different interests, they apply for different
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which means in some
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the
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of
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may outnumber the guy considerably. Take biology faculty as an example, it is highly likely that more than half of the applicants would be
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, so it is often difficult to split up
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into groups equally.
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, it is impractical to adopt
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approach. All things considered, the idea of having an equal
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and mother in each classroom seems sensible, but it is slightly utopian.
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, the proposal can be fulfilled as long as the number of male and female candidates is equal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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