The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The scheme below represents what should happen in order to recycle plastic bottles into raw
materials
and others
different products.
Correct quantifier usage
other
To begin
with , everything start
when individuals throw out bottles into Change the verb form
starts
alevator
. After , a garbage truck picks up all trash and Correct your spelling
elevator
transfer
them to the recycling centre . In Correct subject-verb agreement
transfers
this
centre
the battles are sorted. Add a comma
,centre
Then
, all this
stuff is compressed into blocks.
In the second part of the recycling process the blocks get into a crushing machine and after
this
procedure turn into small pieces of plastic. Also
, these pieces are washed. Next,
all this
washed powders go into a special device which is producing plastic pellets. These pallets are heated and become raw Change the determiner
these
materials
. As a result
, the raw materials
can be already used or products can be produced through raw materials
.
In conclusion , recycling is not easy
and fast process. Add an article
an easy
This
process include
a lot of different aspects and human labour.Change the verb form
includes
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