Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion

Teaching methods are

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into two categories. Some people think that

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an

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improvement of children is the best way of studying at

home

,

while

others think that it is essential to go to school. On the one hand, giving

an

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education at

home

is the best way to input

learners

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brains, because of

this

, at

home

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nobody did not surround,

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from the teacher.

For instance

, the majority of wealthy families use

this

method, and a number of disabled populations

also

have a knack for it. In my personal perspective,

this

way will be perfect, whose aim is truly defined in advance.

Whereas

, homemade students common situations do not have qualifications

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communication,

such

as presentation or speech in front of the public.

On the other hand

, I suggest that everyone study

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school. First and foremost, most of the wealthy and high intelligence people came from the public academy.

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, if the scholar takes

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education from the university or another tutorial

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, that kind of

learners

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learner

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have an indulgence to achieve something from

this

world.

Secondly

, that type of

children

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know

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about hassles and difficulties in the world, and they have learned crucial rules about life. In my view, institutes learn more mundane knowledge than

home

students.

In addition

, the study

centers

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nurture

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the pupils

with

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in

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a variety of sophisticated ways,

such

as giving a plethora of homework,

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cleaning up the classroom around precise

time

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. In conclusion, learning something is not choosing the position. In my opinion, making a decision depends on the people or sometimes their parents.