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MAny people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. Do you agree?

#people #country #materials #goods
There has been a discussion about the goal which every
country
 should try to achieve. Does the increasing
production
 of materials and goods become the main objective in the
country
.
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This
 topic brings many questions to the debate. Is it really necessary to produce more
products
 every year and does it really help
to
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our society and the
country
 and what
impact
 does it bring
to
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 the
environment
? The increasing
production
 of goods and other
products
 provides
country
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the country
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 with
bigger
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impact
to
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 the world. The
production
 line
have
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a
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 possibility to provide the manufactured object to the nation and to other countries. That leads to
better
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 economic situation in the native
country
.
Also
 rising supply of
products
this
 day is
also
 important because of population growth. That means that increased manufacturing of
products
 can reach the necessary demand
of
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products
.
However
,
this
 growing
production
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 line is making a huge
impact
to
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 society and the
environment
.
Enormous
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 supply of
products
 encourages people to use more and buy more, which leads to
the
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 bigger demand
of
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 the product.
This
 creates the infinite circle of buying, using, throwing it out and buying the same product again.
Much
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 better and more sustainable way would be to fix the broken product.
This
 wasteful
life-style
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lifestyle
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 brings many problems to the
environment
. Huge
production
 lines produce more emissions, use more raw materials and etc. All
this
 leads to
the
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 negative
impact
 on the planet and causes effects
such
 as global warming.
To conclude
this
 topic, we need to understand that the goal of producing more
products
 and goods have
negative
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 and positive
impact
 on us and on the
environment
 that we live in. Even if increasing
manufacturing
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 of objects is good for the
country
 and
the
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society, we need to understand that
this
 huge
production
 is harming the world.
Therefore
, we need to understand that the causes of increasing
production
 will eventually harm not only the
environment
 but
also
 the countries and societies. And that the goal to produce more
products
 is absurd and will lead us to total chaos in the world.
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