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Popular hobbies and interest change over time and are reflection of fashion and Trends ,not indicators of what people actually want to do in their free time do you agree or disagree with this statement

#hobbies #interest #change #time #reflection #fashion #trends #indicators #people
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change
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subsequently
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according to
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 the fashion and trends in society and social media, and not
according to
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 what
individuals
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 really want to do in their leisure time. In
this
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 case, I strongly agree with the first opinion that
people
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's
interest
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change
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 over time
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 fashion and trends.
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,
this
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 is because of the level of technology and information on social media that
individuals
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 take into consideration when choosing a hobby, These trendy fun activities on social media make
people
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change
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 their interests and sometimes their lifestyles.
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, there is a
trend
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 of a lot of
people
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 going to the gym to exercise and keep fit,
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 has made other
people
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 take their health more seriously and affected the lifestyle of
individuals
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 positively.
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, the fear of missing out on the fashion in vogue influences the
interest
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 of
people
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. Some
people
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 believe that if they do not
change
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 their interests and hobbies with what is in vogue, they will miss out on the fun of the
trend
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 and will not be able to meet up or they would not fit into society without joining the
trend
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.
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 they try to fit themselves into what is in vogue. The aspect of mental health cannot be left out. Some persons going through a tough time at a particular phase of their life see the
trend
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 as a coping mechanism, thereby making them switch their hobbies and
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 as a means to survive. From experience, a friend of mine who was going through depression decided to
change
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 the colour of her hair on a particular day to the trending colour.
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 was an impulse decision and it helped her to feel alive and better.
On the other hand
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, if she had acted based on what she really wanted, she could have had suicidal thoughts. Taking everything into consideration, I totally agree that trends influence the rate at which
people
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's interests and hobbies
change
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, and it makes
individuals
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 feel alive because we are all social beings.
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