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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

You want to book a hotel that one of your friends recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside. Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements. In your letter, ➡️explain what accommodation you require and when you want to stay ➡️ask what will be included in the price ➡️enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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DEAR SIR OR MADAM I would like to make a reservation at your tavern. I hear about your hotel from my friend . He highly recommended your resort for a family holiday. And
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 like to book a room for my stay.
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, I want accommodation for my family of four (2 adults and 2 children) for the coming 2 weeks. I prefer to big room with two separate beds for children. Please let me know if
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 a room is available.
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, I want to know about details on what is price include. Which includes breakfast, Wi-Fi, and other tavern orders
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 swimming pool and fitness club.
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, I would know any information about the interesting facilities and places near your hotel. We are interested in water sports, sightseeing and other team games. I look forward to your response Best regards Joʻrabek Jabborov

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tone
Make sure to maintain consistent tone and formality in your writing, particularly in the greeting and closing.
grammar
Be careful with grammatical details, such as article usage (e.g., 'a big room' instead of 'big room').
phraseology
Try to avoid overly casual phrases like 'I would know'; instead, you could say, 'I would like to know'.
content
You clearly explained your accommodation needs and timeframe.
tone
Your letter has a friendly tone, which is appropriate for this context.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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