Football
is the most well-known and lucrative sport all around the world.
Additionally
, after approximately a hundred years, it has become an industry that makes a profit from it because of brought by the capitalist system is impossible to compete with the environment,
football
is one of the chain ways on the hierarchy. It has been an opportunity for sub-class citizens to escape daily life problems and stress to find themselves and create a new career.
Footballers
who have earned more
money
than
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professions mostly start
this
job in childhood and move to middle age accepted
according to
someone
while
others think it is an unbalanced distribution of salary, for me, it is an
obviousChange the word
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unjust conclusion of the capitalist system.
To begin
with, the power of advertisement has emerged in every aspect of
football
, which we have been exposed to through television, billboards, or even a café so which gives a credit to
makingChange the form of the verb
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more
money
than the other occupations and it has caused an unbalanced system of salary.
Football
, from its sponsor to flag, contains huge income from different areas by using psychological technics. When
people
gather for the same purpose, it creates an inner group to dismiss the other or the unwanted, and the commercial companies or highly profitable sponsors mostly exploiting from it for taking advantage of it. In
this
way,
while
the companies that are attached to
footballers
gain more power from followers, the gap between the professions has been opened. It has been serving wealth’s income not only by becoming a fan but
also
by passively watching.
On the other hand
,
footballers
start their jobs when they are in the middle of their childhood and
this
occupation requires removing distracting things for full concentration,
that is
might be one of the reasons why
footballers
make more
money
. They mostly signed a contract that includes severe conclusions if they move away.
Footballers
have to stick with those harsh rules
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almost twenty years without break.
Furthermore
,
football
utilizes context to release tension or stress and meeting for who believe related
team
.
People
who spent time with
football
tend to be more relaxed and united, they ignore the
money
that they lay on it. Fans and
footballers
consider giving
money
as investing or contributing for the
team
's sake. Everyone who believes in
football
to watch the
team
and try to protect it whatever their circumstances are.
Football
could reach all more easily than other occupations which
isChange the verb form
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why anyone easily invests in it.
In my opinion,
football
could easily
usedChange the verb form
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for making
money
from
people
,
such
as other occupations that have high advertisement power and it
benefitChange the verb form
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the richest who are
connectWrong verb form
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theChange preposition
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football
companies. In time, it is likely to lose its essence and
becomingWrong verb form
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only an industry without ethical procedures.
To sum up
,
footballers
and their related corporations have been making
amountAdd an article
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of
money
from their followers and it produces
unbalancedAdd an article
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distribution of salary in everywhere
ofChange preposition
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the earth. Even,
peopleCorrect word choice
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who
followsChange the verb form
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footballsFix the agreement mistake
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might
be feelChange the verb form
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more comfortable and united,
tendCorrect word choice
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to invest
a Remove the article
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money
forChange preposition
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the development of the
team
, it still
tradeChange the verb form
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on its followers.