You have been living in an apartment for the last three years. A few problems have emerged in your apartment since the last repair. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, give details of the last repair work what the problems are now how you would like the landlord to solve these problems
Dear landlord,
I'm writing
this
letter to inform you about a few problems that I faced with these since the last
repair.
I have been living in an apartment
for around 3 years and since the last
,repair I have had a few problems.I would like to describe to you some details about it.The earlier of the three years of my living in an apartment
, the fire alarm was working weak or many times it didn't work. As a result
, most of the time I had a problem with cooking.Because it couldn't transfer the smell to the outside.
After sending my request to an apartment
manager, the two repairmen came and fixed it.Now, during the day ,not only the fire alarm starts to call without reason but also
, the sound is too loud.
I have a baby and after calling the fire alarm starts to cry which makes him nervous.I tried to contact the apartment
manager again but he was reluctant to answer me and even I send an email to him but he didn't answer me. I would be appreciated it if you contact an apartment
manager for telling my situation.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
SaraSubmitted by saraseifi2016 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite