the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habit in five Australian cities.
The given chart illustrates the results of the survey about people's
coffee
and tea buying in five Australian cities.
Overall
, the maximum percentage is 63% which prefers to drink coffee
, especially in Melbourne and Hobart. The minimum percentage is about 35% which prefers to buy fresh coffee
, especially in Brisbane
.
Firstly
, the first place
is going to a cafe for coffee
and tea is 63% in Melbourne and Hobart. The second place
is 56% in Brisbane
. And the last
place
is 56% and under 50% in order in Brisbane
and Adelaide.
Secondly
, the maximum for buying coffee
is 54% in Hobart and Brisbane
. The second place
is 50% in Adelaide. And the rest are similar to each other.
The last
one is buying fresh coffee
. The first place
is 43% in Sydney and the second place
is 42% in Melbourne and the last
place
is under 35% in Brisbane
and Adelaide.Submitted by Niyoshakhalili on
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