Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case What problems can it cause.

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are imitate

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by famous

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and stars , the reason for

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, I believed that they are developing their own image and developing their own image they are trying their way to build their sense of identity. On the one hand, some teenagers prefer to get dressed up well to meet their peers and get to

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of

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identity

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from their peers, so they get used to

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what they learn and see from the media or

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. Since all the advertisements are spread widely among a new generation become a

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impact

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young people

admire

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to admire

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and imitate their style of dressing

,

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so that

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famous people are becoming role models for

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the youth

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.

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, there are impact several problems.

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, young society dressing very differently and

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update

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to purchase their

cloths

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clothes

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might cause conflict with their

parents

.

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, if young society

keep

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blindly

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following the new

trendy

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or model , it will

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their

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wisely

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to

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what they really need and want.

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, when young people keep

purchase

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new

cloths

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clothes

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not

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good for the environment and

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sustainable. In conclusion, some youth

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a lot of money on their

parents

.

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lead

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to family financial problems.

this

case causes problems for the

parents

and

unsustainable

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an unsustainable

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environment, maybe

parents

can guide their youth

think

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twice and wisely to build up their image,

confidently

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and confidently

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to

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identity

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themselves with minimalism.