Many people nowadays do not feel safe either when they are in home or go out what are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem
Crimes
rates
has
reached Change the verb form
have
it's
peak in everyReplace the word
its
countries
nowadays , and Change to a singular noun
country
as a
result
Add a comma
,result
people
are feeling uncomfortable to stay
at Change the verb form
staying
home
or go
out. Wrong verb form
going
This
essay will provide reasons and solution
to overcome Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
this
situation.
Firstly
, it can be seen that the increasing rates
of crimes
like robbery and murders in society and most of
Change preposition
apply
countries
like India Add an article
the countries
has
reported it in their records throughout the years . Change the verb form
have
People
are keeping their valuable materials like gold organ ments
and other things in their homes rather than keeping them in banks , which Correct your spelling
meats
influence
criminals to rob the place. Correct subject-verb agreement
influences
Moreover
, some nations have less effective punishment
measures
, which do not scared
the individuals after committing Change the verb form
scare
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
a crime
crimes
crimes
. For example
, the punishment
measures
in Dubai are really effective which even terrify the whole societyAdd the comma(s)
, as a result,
as a result
most people
are scared to commit crimes
; therefore
people
are feeling safe to reside in that country.
There are so many measures
we can take to solve this
issue. Introducing strict punishment
in countries can mitigate the crimes
Change the noun form
crime
rates
in society , and eventually, people
feel protected when they live in that country. Furthermore
, heavy security measures
like survaliences camera's
and scanners in Change noun form
cameras
Add an article
the home
a home
home
can assist Fix the agreement mistake
homes
the
individuals to protect their valuable things and ensure safety for their own. Correct article usage
apply
Besides
, the higher authorities , like police
force can Correct article usage
the police
also
take effective protocols to crub
the crime Correct your spelling
curb
scrub
rates
. They can hire force to do night pertoling
to ensure the Correct your spelling
paroling
percolating
citizens
safety Change to a genitive case
citizen's
citizens'
while
they are in
Change preposition
at
home
or out .
Add an article
the home
a home
To conclude
, they are several reasons why most people
feel unsafe in
residents. it can be Change preposition
as
due to
increasing
amount of Correct article usage
the increasing
crimes
or keeping expensive items in their homes . However
there are many solutions to ensure the safety of citizens like introducing digital security Add a comma
,However
measures
in home
and increasing the effectiveness Add an article
the home
in
Change preposition
of
punishment
rates
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