Many people nowadays do not feel safe either when they are in home or go out what are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem

Crimes
rates
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peak in every
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nowadays , and
as a
result
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people
are feeling uncomfortable
to stay
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at
home
or
go
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out.
This
essay will provide reasons and
solution
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solutions
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to overcome
this
situation.
Firstly
, it can be seen that the increasing
rates
of
crimes
like robbery and murders in society and most
of
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countries
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like India
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reported it in their records throughout the years .
People
are keeping their valuable materials like gold organ
ments
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meats
and other things in their homes rather than keeping them in banks , which
influence
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criminals to rob the place.
Moreover
, some nations have less effective
punishment
measures
, which do not
scared
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the individuals after committing
a
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a crime
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crimes
.
For example
, the
punishment
measures
in Dubai are really effective which even terrify the whole society
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, as a result,
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as a result
most
people
are scared to commit
crimes
;
therefore
people
are feeling safe to reside in that country. There are so many
measures
we can take to solve
this
issue. Introducing strict
punishment
in countries can mitigate the
crimes
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rates
in society , and eventually,
people
feel protected when they live in that country.
Furthermore
, heavy security
measures
like survaliences
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and scanners in
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the home
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home
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can assist
the
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individuals to protect their valuable things and ensure safety for their own.
Besides
, the higher authorities , like
police
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the police
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force can
also
take effective protocols to
crub
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curb
scrub
the crime
rates
. They can hire force to do night
pertoling
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paroling
percolating
to ensure the
citizens
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citizen's
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safety
while
they are
in
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at
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home
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the home
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or out .
To conclude
, they are several reasons why most
people
feel unsafe
in
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residents. it can be
due to
increasing
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the increasing
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amount of
crimes
or keeping expensive items in their homes .
However
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there are many solutions to ensure the safety of citizens like introducing digital security
measures
in
home
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the home
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and increasing the effectiveness
in
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of
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punishment
rates
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