The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
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The line chart illustrates how the number of
cars
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per household changed in Britain between 1971 and 2007. 
Overall
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, we can see that
car
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ownership increased significantly over the period taken into consideration.
In particular
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, the percentage of
households
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with two
cars
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experienced the biggest growth,
while
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the figure for
households
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without a
car
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fell.  In 1971, almost half of all British citizens did not have regular use of a
car
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.
However
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, 44% of
households
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had at least one
car
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,
while
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only 7% had two
cars
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.
Instead
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, it was not common to own more than three
cars
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per family, in fact, the percentage was just around 2%.  The one-
car
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households
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remained the most common type until 2007,
although
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there were little changes in
this
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figure during the period. The biggest change was seen in family blocks without a
car
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, which declined steadily over the 36-year period to around 25% in 2007.
In contrast
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, the proportion of two-
car
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families increased gradually, and by 2007 it had reached 26%,
whereas
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, for
households
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with more than two
cars
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, the figure remained stable by around 5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, car, households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • household
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • decrease
  • ownership
  • period
  • peak
  • dip
  • noteworthy
  • consistent
  • dramatic
  • highlight
  • significant
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