The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
The line chart illustrates how the number of
cars
per household changed in Britain between 1971 and 2007. 
Overall
, we can see that
car
ownership increased significantly over the period taken into consideration.
In particular
, the percentage of
households
with two
cars
experienced the biggest growth,
while
the figure for
households
without a
car
fell.  In 1971, almost half of all British citizens did not have regular use of a
car
.
However
, 44% of
households
had at least one
car
,
while
only 7% had two
cars
.
Instead
, it was not common to own more than three
cars
per family, in fact, the percentage was just around 2%.  The one-
car
households
remained the most common type until 2007,
although
there were little changes in
this
figure during the period. The biggest change was seen in family blocks without a
car
, which declined steadily over the 36-year period to around 25% in 2007.
In contrast
, the proportion of two-
car
families increased gradually, and by 2007 it had reached 26%,
whereas
, for
households
with more than two
cars
, the figure remained stable by around 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, car, households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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