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Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark through out day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

#door #neighbour #dog #bark #night #reason #style
Dear
Mr.
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 Johnson, Hope all is well at your end I am writing
this
 letter to complain about your
dog
 it is barking the whole day and I have been facing many problems. I am Eva Smith living next door to your house. As
,
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 I am working as an account manager in an international business market company. But I am facing many problems because of your pet as it is barking throughout
day
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 and night.
Due to
this
, I do not complete my official work
as well as
 the rest.
Furthermore
, I suggest you should install
a
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soundproof glasses on windows and doors
then
 the
dog
's barking sound can not disturb the community people
besides
this
 you will leave your
dog
 in the
dog
 care centre that place
provide
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 proper care
your
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dog
 like as an own
dog
. All in all, we are living as a family in
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society. So I request you please do that steps because it is essentially our life.
Due to
 the barking of dogs, I cannot concentrate on my work and study
along with
this
, I can not take proper rest. As it puts a detrimental effect on career and health. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.
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