Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

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Dear Mr John, Hope all is well at your end I am writing

this

letter to complain about your

dog

it is parking throughout the whole day and I have been facing many problems. I am Eva Smith, living next door to your house. As I am working as an account manager in an international business market company. But I am facing numerous obstacles because of your puppy as it is barking throughout the day and night.

Due to

this

, I do not complete my official work

as well as

the rest.

Furthermore

, I suggest you should install soundproof glasses on windows and doors

then

the

dog

's barking sound cannot disturb the community's people

besides

this

, you will leave your pet in the

dog

centre and who provides proper care for your

dog

like as own

dog

. All in all, we are living in a society as a family. So I suggest you have taken some positive steps because it is essential for our life.

Due to

the barking of pets, I can not concentrate on my work

along with

this

,I can not take proper rest at night. Henceforth, it puts a detrimental effect on my career and health. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

209 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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