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Your next door neighbour own a small dog that bark throughout day and night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Your reason for writing. What you would like to happen. A nice respectful style.

#door #neighbour #dog #bark #night #reason #style
Dear Mr John, Hope all is well at your end I am writing
this
 letter to complain about your
dog
 it is parking throughout the whole day and I have been facing many problems. I am Eva Smith, living next door to your house. As I am working as an account manager in an international business market company. But I am facing numerous obstacles because of your puppy as it is barking throughout the day and night.
Due to
this
, I do not complete my official work
as well as
 the rest.
Furthermore
, I suggest you should install soundproof glasses on windows and doors
then
 the
dog
's barking sound cannot disturb the community's people
besides
this
, you will leave your pet in the
dog
 centre and who provides proper care for your
dog
 like as own
dog
. All in all, we are living in a society as a family. So I suggest you have taken some positive steps because it is essential for our life.
Due to
 the barking of pets, I can not concentrate on my work
along with
this
,I can not take proper rest at night. Henceforth, it puts a detrimental effect on my career and health. Looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.
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