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The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and pie show the total value and sources of fish imports to the UK from 1990 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table and pie chart illustrates the change in
value
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 and sources of
fish
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 imports to the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2000.
It is clear that
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 the
value
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 of
fish
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 had risen and the main importing
countries
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 were Japan
as well as
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 Canada during
this
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 period. In the past, Canada played a significant role in the sources of
fish
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in contrast
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 to other
countries
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 was the second-largest importer to the United Kingdom in 1990.
Although
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 Japan was the second main import country, it totally imports less than other
countries
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.
Additionally
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, the figure for
fish
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 was only 6.5
billion
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pounds
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 in 1990. At the beginning time of
this
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 period, the total
value
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 of
fish
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 imports had gradually risen from 6.5
billion
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pounds
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 to 7.05
billion
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pounds
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. At the same time, other
countries
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 become the main importers of
fish
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 in 1995. We can see that there was a dramatic increase in the
value
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 of
fish
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 products, by around 3
billion
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pounds
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, in the next five years.
Also
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, the second-highest importer of
fish
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 was replaced by Japan in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, fish, countries, billion, pounds with synonyms.
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