Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Some people often argue whether there must be fixed punishments for any
crime
or Use synonyms
the
circumstances and reasons Correct word choice
whether the
of
committing a Change preposition
for
crime
should Use synonyms
be consider
before inflicting Change the verb form
be considered
punishment
. Here, I will discuss both views since fixed Use synonyms
punishment
would consume a short time Use synonyms
judgement
Change preposition
of judgement
while
sufficient Linking Words
punishment
will be given to Use synonyms
criminals
after knowing their motives for the Use synonyms
crime
.
Giving a fixed Use synonyms
punishment
would make a court procedure a lot quicker. Use synonyms
This
is because judges would not need to investigate the Linking Words
crime
as the Use synonyms
punishment
has been already decided for Use synonyms
criminals
. I think Use synonyms
this
action Linking Words
are
not fair because there are some Change the verb form
is
criminals
does not deserve the punishments given to them. Use synonyms
For example
, a person robbing a bank will not Linking Words
having
an equal Change the verb form
have
be having
punishment
Use synonyms
with
a person robbing a Change preposition
as
convenient
store. Replace the word
convenience
Hence
, I believe Linking Words
although
fixed Linking Words
punishment
helps the court’s decision easier, it is an unfair practice to set Use synonyms
same
Correct article usage
the same
punishment
for each Use synonyms
crime
.
Before decidingUse synonyms
a
Change preposition
on a
punishment
, the situation or motivation that led to Use synonyms
commit
Change the verb form
committing
Use synonyms
crime
should Correct article usage
the crime
be consider
Change the verb form
be considered
because
to ensure Correct word choice
apply
a
right Correct article usage
the
punishment
is handed down to Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the criminal
criminal
. The reason is some crimes are done in a desperate Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
condition
. Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
For instance
, a person killed someone Linking Words
as
Change preposition
in
a
Remove the article
apply
self-defense
, or a robbery Change the spelling
self-defence
happen
to feed a family. Wrong verb form
happened
Then
, these crimes should be given a necessary Linking Words
punishment
for them just to reflect Use synonyms
themselves
on what they did Correct pronoun usage
apply
is
wrong. Correct your spelling
as
Thus
, I believe considering the circumstances of crimes will give Linking Words
a
right justice for Correct article usage
the
criminals
.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, I aware Linking Words
fixed
Correct word choice
that fixed
punishment
aid the process of sentencing Use synonyms
criminals
but checking the motive of the Use synonyms
crime
should take into account first to prove their faultUse synonyms
Submitted by farahhuzaimee on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?