Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.

Some people often argue whether there must be fixed punishments for any

crime

or

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whether the

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circumstances and reasons

of

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for

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committing a

crime

should

be consider

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be considered

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before inflicting

punishment

. Here, I will discuss both views since fixed

punishment

would consume a short time

judgement

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of judgement

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while

sufficient

punishment

will be given to

criminals

after knowing their motives for the

crime

. Giving a fixed

punishment

would make a court procedure a lot quicker.

This

is because judges would not need to investigate the

crime

as the

punishment

has been already decided for

criminals

. I think

this

action

are

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is

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not fair because there are some

criminals

does not deserve the punishments given to them.

For example

, a person robbing a bank will not

having

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have

be having

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an equal

punishment

with

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as

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a person robbing a

convenient

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store.

Hence

, I believe

although

fixed

punishment

helps the court’s decision easier, it is an unfair practice to set

same

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the same

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punishment

for each

crime

. Before deciding

a

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on a

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punishment

, the situation or motivation that led to

commit

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committing

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crime

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the crime

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should

be consider

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be considered

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because

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apply

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to ensure

a

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the

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right

punishment

is handed down to

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the criminal

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criminal

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criminals

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. The reason is some crimes are done in a desperate

condition

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conditions

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.

For instance

, a person killed someone

as

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in

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a

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apply

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self-defense

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self-defence

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, or a robbery

happen

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happened

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to feed a family.

Then

, these crimes should be given a necessary

punishment

for them just to reflect

themselves

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apply

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on what they did

is

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as

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wrong.

Thus

, I believe considering the circumstances of crimes will give

a

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the

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right justice for

criminals

.

To conclude

, I aware

fixed

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that fixed

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punishment

aid the process of sentencing

criminals

but checking the motive of the

crime

should take into account first to prove their fault