The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram illustrates the
process
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of manufacturing instant noodles.
This
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essay will explain the whole instant cup
noodle making
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noodle-making
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process
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step by step.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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there are eight steps to
make
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instant cup noodles.
Moreover
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, five ingredients were used in the entire
process
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. Before the
process
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begins, flour is brought by a truck to the storage silos. Flour is moved to a huge mixer with water and oil. Once the ingredients are mixed in the mixer, rollers form the batter into flat
dough
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sheets. After that,
Dough
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sheets are
splited
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split
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into
dough
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strips by the machine.
Next,
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dough
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strips are formed into rounded noodle discs. Noodle disks are fried in cooking oil
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dried along the conveyer belt. Cooked and dried noodles are put into
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cups with vegetables and spices.
Finally
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, the cups are labelled and sealed with packages, and ready to be sold.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, dough with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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