The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 200 to 2006
The bar illustrates the holistic
market
share
of different kinds digital
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of digital
games
from 2000 to 2006.
Overall
, whereas
the sales
of handheld games
, online games
, and mobile games
inclined, market
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the market
share
of console games
fell over the span.
At the beginning of the loop sales
of handheld games
were twice as much as for console console
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games
representing 12 billion
$. In the following year
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,year
games
started to sale
and were almost 500 million $. In 2002 Replace the word
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sales
of handheld games
saw an extrem
increase of approximately 3 Correct your spelling
extreme
billion
$. In addition
, mobile phone games
appear on
the Change preposition
in
market
share
in
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this
year.
From the
2003 to 2004 online Change the article
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games
and mobile phone games
sales
went up noticeably as well as
sales
of handheld games
, while
the sales
of console games
remained stable at about 5 billion
$. In 2005, market
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the market
share
of handheld games
was almost 15$ billions
, which was a sum of all other sorts of Change to singular
billion
games
. At
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games
sales
represented the lowest around 3 billion
$. Meanwhile, accounting for just below 18 billion
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of handheld games
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