In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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It is a refutable fact that
foods
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are wasted in some nations around the world.
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essay will discuss reasons why people neglect the value of proper
food
consumptions
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consumption
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and remedies to avoid
such
problems.
Firstly
wastage of
food
usually
occur
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in first world countries, individuals living in
such
places are
privilege
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to dine in restaurants, bars or hotels, having a grand promotion of all you can eat and drink. They are
also
enjoying the partying
life styles
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lifestyles
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which
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food
and drinks are essentially needed to be prepared in order to make it a happy time. The buffet
were
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not usually consumed and many
left overs
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leftovers
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were just thrown away because of
establishments
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establishments'
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policies for sanitary
reason
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reasons
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.
Secondly
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crops from fields of other poor nations
does
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not reach the market for selling, the
farm to market
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farm-to-market
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ways are so difficult for some remote areas
thus
crops are
also
wasted. In
this
situation I suggest , first
to ask
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the legislators of rich countries to draft laws or policies to limit or modify hotel and restaurant
industries
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industries'
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promotions regarding
food
consumptions
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consumption
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. They can
also
excise higher taxes on
this
kind of
events
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.
Second,
for poor nations officials, government funding should prioritize building and developing road projects in order for the farmers to easily reach the markets where they can sell their produce.
Food
wastage can be minimized if can not be prevented, if proper coordination,
good
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and good
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implementation of laws and regulations
is
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observed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • food waste
  • excessive
  • portion sizes
  • expiration dates
  • storage
  • preservation
  • inefficient
  • cultural
  • incentives
  • reduce
  • awareness
  • education
  • planning
  • organization
  • misinterpretation
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