Nowadays many people choose to be self empoyed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.Why might this be the case?What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

in recent times many
people
prefer to start their own
job
instead
of working as an employee.
this
essay will explain why
this
issue occurred and what are the disadvantages. In the contemporary era, there are many
people
who want to start their own businesses.They don'
t
like jobs at any company.They want to develop their business.
this
issue has many reasons. if you have your own activity you can close it when a problem happens and do other things or solve the problems because you have freedom of action, in spite of governmental
job
that you do have not
this
advantage.,
moreover
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if you are self-employed you can
change
your career when emergency times or you making qualitative and quantitative changes because you have no limits in it ,
therefore
by changing it you can get out of sensitive situations and
also
progress with a new position.
for example
my uncle had a grocery store , after five years he faced with many problems about his
job
because his selling decrease. he decided to
change
it and
change
his grocery store to a hairdresser, by
this
change
he exited an emergency situation and improved. in ,contrast having own career has some disadvantages. lack of
job
security is a problem. An economic crisis is a normal happening that occurs in each country. if you are self-employed you are more in danger of financial loss at it because you haven'
t
any financial sponsor.
as a result
you may bankrupt and economic destruction.
furthermore
having own work has high costs.you should rent a store and buy facilities and invest or take a loan, so you owe money to many
people
and banks and if you haven'
t
enough income , you cannot pay your debts. so your business destructs in the wake of an economic crisis and your debts.
for instance
my friend's father took loans from three banks and many
people
because he had decided to start a chemical factory. after two years his factory products didn'
t
find any buyers. unfortunately he bankrupt and now he's in prison.
to sum up
having freedom of action and the ability to
change
jobs when emergency times are two reasons for
people
to start their own activity , on the other ,hand lack of
job
security and high cost are two disadvantages of
this
method
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