You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table below gives information about the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The table depicts the changes that happened in New Zealand’s population between 2011 and 2012.
Overall
, there was a slight increase in the all-ages number of people. The major change was in the elderly class, which increased a lot.
Although
there were no giant differences in other classes. First of all, the population had increased a bit in general. It equalled (4400000, 4460000) in (2011, 2012) respectively and the percentage difference was +0.6.
Also
, we can notice the same changes for those ages
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40 and 64. As they were 1400000 in 2011. It raised
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60000 persons in 2012.
Furthermore
, there was a bit decline in the number of people under 39. Which are expressed in the table in two classes.
Nevertheless
, the considerable variation was in older ones which raised a lot from 500 thousand people in 2011 to 900 thousand in 2012. The parentage of change was +4.0.
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