A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday fort he first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your. In your letter •explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday •describe some possible disadvantages •say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Emily, I haven't seen you for a long
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so I am very excited to meet you. I know that you are thinking of going on a camping holiday
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summer
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for the first
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. I am very happy about that and I am always ready to give you some advice. A camping holiday is a wonderful idea. Especially
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summer
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. I think that not only do you want to go camping on holiday in
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but
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a
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of people because
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the best
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for people to enjoy life after a hard working day. One of the most important reasons why you should go camping is that you are able to see the views and meet a
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of people.
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a chance for you to understand more about a
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of cultures in our country which you have never known before. The other reason is that you can take part in some social activities which are very interesting.
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, there are some disadvantages. In the first place, it will have a negative impact on your skin so you have to wear a hat before going camping outside.
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, it is easy for you to be ill because the weather in
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is quite hot so you have to prepare medicines before. I would
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like to go camping with you
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summer
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because I have a
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of free
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. I will be waiting for your reply. Hope to meet soon. Your close friend.
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