Our personalities are predefined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing can be done to change our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

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It is opined our traits are predefined resulting from our genes before birth and it is an unchangeable character persona. I strongly disagree with
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statement.
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with, human characters are affected by a number of factors
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as family, events, or religion rather than genes alone.
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, family is the first environment which is, probably, the most impact factor on children. Since birth, children's habits are hugely inherited from the people interacting with them.
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, if the parents pay strict attention to the kids, they will tend to form discipline and responsible habits when they thrive in adolescence. What’s more, meaningful events can
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turn the perspective of kids upside down.
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tragic situations
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as being raped, or bullied, these days, the child's mindset may be ruined forever without being cured in time.
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, the choice of ritual, or evil cult, has shaped the belief of man. If the young were raised in a cult that has the concept that you can murder a man in the name of peace if they opposed the method of the cult, they would likely become arrogant or have a personality disorder which can be harmful to society.
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the increase of terrorist incidences, in
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age, most population willingly choose to be atheists, not having a religion, even though doctrine is still indispensable in most of humanity. In conclusion,
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genes can define character, there are other considerations that tremendously impact it
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as the education from family, accidental events, or the selection of religion
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