Some psychologists recommend that to overcome stresses in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time of the day to what extent do you agree or disagree

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These recent years, mental health professionals advocated that

people

should allocate time for themselves to be free for parts of their days to improve their mental health and well-being. I agree to a certain degree that

people

should have some time off during the day to help

people

able to restore themselves. In the following paragraphs, I will explain my views and opinions towards

this

issue. First of all,

people

should get some gaps between jobs and personal life, because the gaps would help them to have some boundaries between tasks and private life.

Likewise

, sitting in the car doing nothing after a hectic production day.

This

strategy could help the person able to refresh themselves and understand the elements of work-life balance.

Consequently

, it could help the person able to leave their job behind and go home without work stress on their shoes.

On the other hand

people

need to have sometimes themselves, do not means that they do nothing; but they should plan sometimes for themselves to do something that can help them to overcome their stresses.

For example

, some

people

love to exercise, dance, read a book or even talk to family.

Such

strategies could help the person able to understand themselves more and that can be their coping strategy.

While

people

have an understanding of their own coping mechanisms they can combat adversity in their own ways.

To sum up

, everyone has their ways to manage stress. We should be more open to new coping strategies. I still believe that doing nothing is just a way to cope with adversity. I think they still have ample ways to combat the issues.

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Some psychologists recommend that to overcome stresses in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time of the day to what extent do you agree or disagree

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

An increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.Why is this the caseand what solutions are possible?

All over the world , the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer, What problem does this cause? How can we oversome the problems of poverty.

in some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. discuss both views and give your opinion

Many people work from home using modern technology today. Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not the employer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?