The differences between countries are becoming less and less evident, as people all over the world wear the same fashions, use the same brands, have similar eating habits and watch the same TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

People
around the
world
have their own traditions and
culture
. Every country
have
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their own history and background.
However
, I completely agree with the statement that
difference
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among countries
are
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now becoming less and less evident.
Firstly
, the internet and other social applications have made the
world
very close. All the
people
around the globe now have
the
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knowledge of fashion and brands
beacuase
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because
people
have easy access
through
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internet
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the internet
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from where they watch what's trending and follow them.
Also
,
peole
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people
have the same eating habits. For
examples
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, now eating pizza and junk food is becoming more popular
however
, a few decades ago no one knows about these things. All
beacuse
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because
of social media and applications that made the
world
little.
Secondly
, the urge of
people
to travel around
world
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have
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also
made it easy for everyone to buy from the brands and wear
the
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similar fashion. Today,
people
like to adopt different
culture
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cultures
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and eating habits of others they like.
People
like to watch the same TV shows as they want to go with
trend
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the trend
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.
People
could relate
with
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their situations easily.
Lastly
, where
this
trend has
alot
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a lot
of advantages it
also
has some drawbacks. As
people
are
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losing their identity
like
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from where they belong? what was their
culture
? and what their forefathers
follows
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?.
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Today, the new generation wants to go with the trend and
have
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forgotten their past values.
However
, their forefathers
wants
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to stick with their
culture
and values
that
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which
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creates a gap between them.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global community
  • interconnectedness
  • cultural exchange
  • global brands
  • economic benefits
  • shared prosperity
  • cultural identity
  • cultural diversity
  • environmental impact
  • local customs
  • local businesses
  • economic difficulties
  • adaptation
  • culture shock
  • dominance
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