The differences between countries are becoming less and less evident, as people all over the world wear the same fashions, use the same brands, have similar eating habits and watch the same TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
People
around the world
have their own traditions and culture
. Every country have
their own history and background. Change the verb form
has
However
, I completely agree with the statement that difference
among countries Fix the agreement mistake
differences
are
now becoming less and less evident.
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is
Firstly
, the internet and other social applications have made the world
very close. All the people
around the globe now have the
knowledge of fashion and brands Correct article usage
apply
beacuase
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because
people
have easy access through
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to
internet
from where they watch what's trending and follow them. Correct article usage
the internet
Also
, peole
have the same eating habits. For Correct your spelling
people
examples
, now eating pizza and junk food is becoming more popular Fix the agreement mistake
example
however
, a few decades ago no one knows about these things. All beacuse
of social media and applications that made the Correct your spelling
because
world
little.
Secondly
, the urge of people
to travel around world
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the world
have
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has
also
made it easy for everyone to buy from the brands and wear the
similar fashion. Today, Correct article usage
apply
people
like to adopt different culture
and eating habits of others they like. Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
People
like to watch the same TV shows as they want to go with trend
. Add an article
the trend
People
could relate with
their situations easily.
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to
Lastly
, where this
trend has alot
of advantages it Correct your spelling
a lot
also
has some drawbacks. As people
are
losing their identity Unnecessary verb
apply
like
from where they belong? what was their Change preposition
apply
culture
? and what their forefathers follows
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follow
?.
Today, the new generation wants to go with the trend and Change the punctuation
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have
forgotten their past values. Correct subject-verb agreement
has
However
, their forefathers wants
to stick with their Change the verb form
want
culture
and values that
creates a gap between them.Correct pronoun usage
which
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...