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  • corporal punishment
  • disciplinary techniques
  • short-term effectiveness
  • long-term psychological impact
  • deterrent
  • undesirable behavior
  • aggression
  • parent-child relationship
  • self-regulation
  • moral reasoning
  • non-physical discipline
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