The companies and individuals should pay to clean pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is often argued that financial investment in cleaning the
pollution
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should be the
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and people’s responsibility rather than the
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. I partly agree with the statement. On the one hand, the major reason is that the payment from
companies
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and individuals can effectively help to get rid of
pollution
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.
Companies
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and individuals must change their unfriendly ways of operating and living to be greener if the payment for cleaning takes a main part of their incomes.
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, in some countries,
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as China, manufacturing
companies
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are asked for paying plenty of money to eliminate the negative effects of industrial waste gases.
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, they have already improved their manufacturing methods with less wasted gases emission.
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, air
pollution
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in industrial areas has been better than before.
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, the government needs to invest and lay the foundation for an anti-
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drive which the private sector can take up and follow.
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is because
pollution
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cleanup is a gigantic task which
governments
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can undertake effectively vis-a-vis the private sector. The huge finance required can be borne only by
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and not individual private
companies
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. The large machinery and equipment needed to stop or clean up
pollution
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could be installed by
governments
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and the
companies
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could implement the practice. In conclusion,
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governments
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could formulate suitable laws and invest in the basic infrastructure needed for it, the private sector must obey the laws to be implemented and recycle waste
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keep their surroundings free of
pollution
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.
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