The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast-food shops between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast-food shops between 2003 and 2013.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of the United States population who have their
meals
at junk-food restaurants over the course of 10 years. Units are measured in percentages. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the majority of the community had unhealthy
meals
once a
week
,
whereas
the fewest people preferred to eat junk food every day.
Moreover
, the frequency of consuming
such
food changed
according to
the years.
According to
the graph, almost 4% of
society
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consumed fast-food every day in 2003 and it decreased to reach roughly 2% and levelled off in 2006. In comparison, people who never had
such
meals
showed a similar pattern and the consumption rate was 5% in 2003. and it plateaued at approximately 2%.
Moreover
, the frequency of several times a
week
and once a
week
had similar figures but individuals who ate fast food once a
week
was
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larger in proportion (an average of 30% for ten years), followed by consumers who consume unhealthy
meals
once/twice a month. (the mean was around 28%). Approximately 14% of the population have
such
meals
a few times per year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meals, week with synonyms.
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