The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selacting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relavent.

The plans illustrate the latest airport site and the refurbished aircraft next
year
.
Overall
, the airport
initially
has four facilities, and within one
year
, the aircraft areas
such
as the departure building, the arrival building
as well as
gates will be expanded and added three more utilities. First of all, the gates will be escalated to eighteen from originally eight units. Every passenger will gain more comfortable utility, they do not no longer walk because the walkways will be replaced by sky trains.
Moreover
, the shopping centre will be brought right into the pathway in front of the gate’s entrance.
However
, inside the departure terminal that recently comprise just only check-in station and coffee shop, people will gain more convenience
due to
the additional construction of the bag drop spot next
year
.
Furthermore
, the arrival side is now empty with zero facilities yet following
year
the area will be improved by parking lots
along with
increasing of many facilities which are a café and an ATM.
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