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Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #books #imagination #language #skills #tv
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In the information age, data are being provided by all sorts of technologies
such
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 and the internet rather than tomes of books and paper-based magazines and so on.
And it
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 is believed that book readers are more likely to be creative and gain
language
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skills
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 than people who watch
TV
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. I partially agree with
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 opinion
due to
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 the facts below. On the one hand, the ones who spend most of their time in front of the
TV
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 would probably learn the languages given in the programmes and
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 by watching cartoons they can improve their fantasy. Nowadays, in
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 programmes, the online courses which became popular in lockdown are still being given and even in more
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efficient methods.
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 learners can improve their
skills
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 by watching them constantly. And watching animated films in their spare time,
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, can broaden children's horizons.
On the other hand
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, reading books
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 always considered to be the best way to improve imagination and to build
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skills
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. Book readers need to visualize the things they are reading in mind and it is very helpful to strengthen imagining
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.
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 the paper-based sources referring to languages
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 be found easily and very conveniently to learn through them anywhere.
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, it is believed by some people that in improving
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skills
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 and imagination, reading books is a more efficient way rather than watching
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.
However
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, watching
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 can
also
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 have the same impact on development
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depending on how it is used, so I partially agree with the statement given.
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