Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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ages
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while
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their
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be
satisfied as possible.
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ages
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are burdened
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peers
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their peers
children
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children
. They may be not enforced to handle some duties. They should be released to live their Use synonyms
childhood
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such
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for
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to
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ages
.
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