Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed

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people that additional responsibilities

such

as chores ought to be undertaken by

children

of all

ages

while

others assert that they should be free, except

their

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studies. Taking some

responsibility

may be beneficial to

children

’s personalities for their future. Looking

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discussion from the other side, they should be allowed to live their

childhood

days as

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satisfied as possible. On the one hand, assuming some

responsibility

provides

children

to become more mature

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their

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early

ages

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.

This

case gets many positive aspects

such

as being already

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unpredicted tough situations and being psychologically stronger than others.

For example

, those who

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some

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responsibility

at early

ages

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can live and run their lives for a

while

without parents.

In addition

, if they worked in their

childhood

years, they would have known the value of money better than

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. In short, even though it would be challenging for

children

, these responsibilities probably give positive benefits to them.

On the other hand

, studying their lessons and being successful may be a sufficient

responsibility

for

children

. They may be not enforced to handle some duties. They should be released to live their

childhood

days which never come again. To illustrate that, memorable activities can be arranged

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them

such

as birthdays and they can be encouraged to get some hobbies.

In addition

, without these responsibilities, they can allocate more time

for

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their studies.

Therefore

,

children

should be enabled to live their

childhood

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in

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early

ages

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. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with

this

discussion.

Although

,

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giving

the

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responsibility

to

children

may be beneficial for their future lives, in my opinion, they ought to be free in their

childhood

years because these years will never come back.