In many countries, city planners locate offices, schools, homes and shops in certain areas so that they are separated by distance. Do you think the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?

Offices, homes and

diversity

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of many

facilities

are situated in different

areas

and divided from each other in many places of the world by city planners’ arrangements. Generally,

this

case gives benefits

such

as creating

quite

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quiet

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places for some

facilities

and facilitating transportation ways to these

areas

. One of the pros of

this

case is places’ isolation from

crowd

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crowds

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and noise. Some

facilities

need to be located in

certain

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a certain

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field

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fields

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which

are

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far from density.

For instance

, to better

studying

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study

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in schools, they should be situated in

quite

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quiet

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zones and be separated. To

given

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another example, religious and sacred places should be divided from entertainment

facilities

.

Thus

, students can study and

people

can pray better. Another advantage of

this

case is mitigating transportation ways in cities. It is possible that authorities may plan that if certain

facilities

are located in determined

areas

,

people

can reach them easier. To illustrate that,

situation

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the situation

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of shopping malls usually

have

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been decided out of highly populated

areas

due to

avoidance of possible density and traffic.

In addition

, these kinds of

areas

are situated in common points for

people

to attract them.

Therefore

, city links and roads can be relieved and shop owners may gain more profit. In conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied

with

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this

fact. Even though

,

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long ranges between

facilities

and living fields is an important problem for a portion of

people

, in my opinion,

facilities

and living

areas

which

divided

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are divided

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by distance bring positive impacts for citizens

such

as studying better, reducing traffic problems and boosting

sellings

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selling

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.