The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007.

The maps below show how a coastal town developed between 1950 and 2007.
The maps demonstrate the ways a coastal town advanced between the years 1950 and 2007. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is apparent that there has been exponential development, specifically with the number of facilities available, utilization of the sea, and modernization of the area. To start, when the world had just entered a new era of agricultural evolution and grasslands were the foundation of a country's economy, the town took advantage of
this
and designed it so that almost half of it was pastures.
Moreover
, on the west of the primary road, there appears to be an industrial area with a myriad of warehouses and factories,
additionally
on the east is an ordinary car park. In the following years, the conurbation had transformed into an unrecallable location with the modern-day required specialities that distinguish it from others
such
as a yacht marina, shops, and even a cinema.
Furthermore
, there is an extensive variety of options for accommodation like apartments and houses.
In addition
, there was a park added near the sea and even a swimming pool in the south of that. The car park next to the pool was upgraded to being multi-storied as well.
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