In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very importatnt for people. Why misht this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Owning a
home
is important for the family or the person to remain happy and not
bothered
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towards paying monthly or yearly.
While
renting a
home
has many dislikes for some
people
, because it can be hard to move on from time to time, and not having your own
home
where you can be more comfortable with it. From the first hand,
people
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opinions vary from one to another about owning or buying a
home
, since it can create a
cozy
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environment for the family and by
that
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it will comfort them from transporting from
place
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to another.
Besides
the positive situation about being an owner of the
house
,
that
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the owner
have
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the reference to renovate the place and
to
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redesign it again.
Also
, owning a
house
can be expensive for some
people
, so they see that renting is a better option for them.
On the other hand
, some
people
travel a lot
due to
their work, so renting is probably more convenient for them and it is a lot faster than searching for a
home
to buy.
In addition
, renting has some negatives too, that you are restricted
with
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several rules,
as well as
the monthly or yearly
paying
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can be difficult for those who work in a normal job.
Last
but not least
about
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renting a
house
is that you don't always find the perfect spot. In conclusion, owning a
house
is definitely the greatest choice, even though the
house
is small and too big,
but
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it's always good to take the first step to make some bigger achievements.
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  • Financial Investment
  • Heritage and Legacy
  • Equity
  • Return
  • Security
  • Permanence
  • Customize
  • Stability
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  • Socioeconomic Disparities
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