Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?
There are two options related to building
a
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residencial
areas. One is constructing taller buildings and another is creating housing in wide areas. In my opinion, having tall buildings are more beneficial since they take Correct your spelling
residential
less
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up less
space
and can regroup many people at the same time.
As humans
we have to think about the environment and what our Add a comma
,humans
action
may cause. Having wide areas of land implies cutting down more trees, Fix the agreement mistake
actions
consequently
causing a bad impact on the
nature. Trees are very vital to all living things. It provides shelter, Correct article usage
apply
food
and even Correct word choice
and food
protect
us from landslides. If we cut them, we will take Correct subject-verb agreement
protects
animals
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animals'
animal's
space
, force them to leave their natural habitat and we may cause natural
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a natural
disaster
, which in turn will negatively affect our environment. Fix the agreement mistake
disasters
However
, if we construct taller houses their
will be no need to take down trees and neither take Replace the word
there
animals
place. We can build as many floors as we want or need. One example Change noun form
animals'
animal's
are
skyscrapers. They don´t take Change the verb form
is
as
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up as
many
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much
space
as we would Change to a plural noun
spaces
image
and many people can live in them. One example is the tallest building in the world in United Emirates Replace the word
imagine
Arabics
. It has more than 100 floors and I would estimate Correct your spelling
Arabic
than
more than 1000 families could live there. Now, imagine if we had to open a Correct word choice
that
space
in land for 1000 families?
The impact would be tremendously bad.
In conclusion, having infrastructures that Change the punctuation
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occupies
less Change the verb form
occupy
space
avoinding
destruction of our mother nature is preferable. It does not bring negative effects Correct your spelling
avoiding
to
our planet.Change preposition
on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite