Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

There are two options related to building
a
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residencial
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residential
areas. One is constructing taller buildings and another is creating housing in wide areas. In my opinion, having tall buildings are more beneficial since they take
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and can regroup many people at the same time. As
humans
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we have to think about the environment and what our
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may cause. Having wide areas of land implies cutting down more trees,
consequently
causing a bad impact on
the
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nature. Trees are very vital to all living things. It provides shelter,
food
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and even
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us from landslides. If we cut them, we will take
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, force them to leave their natural habitat and we may cause
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disaster
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, which in turn will negatively affect our environment.
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, if we construct taller houses
their
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will be no need to take down trees and neither take
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place. We can build as many floors as we want or need. One example
are
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skyscrapers. They don´t take
as
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many
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space
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as we would
image
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and many people can live in them. One example is the tallest building in the world in United Emirates
Arabics
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. It has more than 100 floors and I would estimate
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more than 1000 families could live there. Now, imagine if we had to open a
space
in land for 1000 families
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The impact would be tremendously bad. In conclusion, having infrastructures that
occupies
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less
space
avoinding
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avoiding
destruction of our mother nature is preferable. It does not bring negative effects
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our planet.
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