The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent decades, it has been argued whether the main role of

music

is to reduce the mental stresses of individuals or not. In my opinion, instrumental medicare is somehow applicable to a variety of

people

;

however

, it is impossible to cover all types of individuals. In

this

essay, I will discuss

this

issue by using examples to support ideas and demonstrate points.

To begin

with, from my perspective, I tend to

listen

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music

when I am unable to handle my mental burdens in my house to make myself calm down and relax. Nowadays, instrumental medical programs are significantly prevalent to cure patients who struggle with mental diseases

such

as insomnia or brain disorders.

For example

, when I was a child, I

have

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had epilepsy for three years. The brain illness was recovered through a musical care system in a hospital.

Thus

,the usage of

music

allows

people

to reduce

stressse

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stress

stresses

and brings significant positive effects on mentally

illed

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ill

killed

people

.

On the other hand

, some

people

worry that because of its limited range to cure patients or stressed individuals, the application of instruments can make

people

exacerbated. A person who is affected by severe shivering or

unstability

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instability

will not be able to stabilise with instrumental effects.

For instance

, I have seen a patient who was impossible to sustain stability during

daytime

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,

while

I was impatient to get injections for epilepsy. As soon as nurses turned on instrumental care programs, his unstable condition was getting worse, throwing all the

stuffs

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around him.

Therefore

, as it cannot be adopted by all types of

people

, applying the functions of

music

has to be considered prudently. In conclusion, as far as governments and

people

understand the limitation of

music

which could exacerbate the situation,

music

can be undoubtedly used as medical

programs

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to decrease

stresses

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stress

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.